Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Bella & Edward
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7076900/1/The_Slowest_Burn
You know those fics, the one's that make you go "YES!" when it updates? The one's that have you hiding out in a public bathroom, making excuses to anyone who might miss you, lying though your teeth just so you can get away for ten minutes and read that update? Yeah, this is one of those stories for me.
This fic is intense, it's real, it's sexy. It's so damn fucking good! Hell, I even dig the Bella in this as well, which is rare! I adore how she's such a typical teenage cheerleader, worried about her reputation, following the crowd. Ah, but then a dark, bad-boy Edward walks in...
This E&B have so much insane sexual energy, even when they're arguing you just know it's foreplay. But the best part? Bella isn't jumping into Edward's arms and willing to throw away everything. She still craves the life she has created, and quite frankly, the guy kinda scares the shit outta her! Not only because of his intensity and her huge attraction to him, but the boy seriously thinks of her as his girl...even those she's not! Yeeeeah, she's kinda with Jasper, the school's golden boy.
That doesn't stop Edward from wanting to claim her though:
"I have to go," I mutter truthfully.
He slides his nose down the side of my face and hovers his lips over mine. "No you don't," he whispers without kissing me.
"Yes I do. Please let me go," I beg him with my eyes clenched shut. "I can't do this right now, okay? I just—oh!" I gasp when he thrusts his hips against me and I feel every inch of him pressed along my body. I open my eyes and whimper every time he rubs against me with his hips, causing enough friction between us to start a fire.
"If I see him touch you like that again?" his eyes stare daggers at my own before he leans down and whispers into my ear, "I will break his throwing arm."
I freeze in his arms. He pulls back and I see that his face has morphed into something that slaps my mouth shut tight. There is so much raw hate and anger. Possession and jealousy. On what grounds does he even have the right to feel these sorts of emotions? It scares me.
Would he really hurt Jasper? I close my eyes and breathe through my nose. Of course he would. My eyes are still closed when I feel Cullen's fingers slide around my neck and then up into my hair to cradle the back of my head. I allow my lashes to flutter closed and breathe through my parted lips slowly. I can feel his breath on my face and then his nose at my temple. We exhale together and he moves to press his forehead is against mine. It's calming and alarming at the same time—intense. I clutch at the front of his shirt and suddenly my bottom lip is between his teeth.
I moan like the little closet whore that I am and let go of my inhibitions, there is no use trying to sprinkle water over a blaze this strong. I crash my mouth against his and suck his tongue into my mouth. My left leg rises up to curl around the back of his thigh to pull him closer to me. He grunts and rubs his jean covered hard on against my lower abdomen which turns me right the fuck on because I want it in my mouth. Either there, or lower down between my legs that currently want to spread like fucking peanut butter.
What the fuck? How does he do that? I'm a virgin, a fucking prude and yet I'm more than ready to fuck Cullen right here in the hall at school. The crowd outside roars and I hear the announcer shout out that someone's made a touchdown. But all I comprehend is the fact that Cullen now has one of his hands grabbing my ass and the other is still in my hair.
"Let's get out of here," he whispers against my lips. "If we don't leave now, I'm going to rip your panties off and fuck you right up against this wall."
Not gonna lie...I was too turned on by this first chapter to even consider stopping. Which is a good thing! Because as HOT as this story is, it's also a really great story as well.
The first chapter brings on so many question, because you're damn curious as to why Edward is acting this way. It's obvious that something happened between these two and you'll be dying to know what it was.
As the story continues, it deals with so many real teenage issues, as well a ton of young discoveries. I always like that kind of fic, I like remembering the reality of my youth and the craziness that came with it. These teens make dumb mistakes, like drinking, drugs, or sleeping with the wrong people...but then sometimes they do epic things that stay with them and make them the adults they'll be someday.
I just KNOW you'll love this too!
And when you do read, you'll be just like me once you've caught up: Running to hide out and read, calling your best friend right afterwards to talk about it...then getting mad cause she was at the store and hadn't read yet...so you tell her to call your ass back as soon as she does! *smiles at @Suzie55*
Seriously, go read right fucking now! TSB is too good to pass up, too well written to ignore, too freakin' glorious with emotions for you not to be curious. And don't forget to review and tell Typokeen ('sup Chica!) that Rosie sent cha'!
And I hope she likes this blinkie! I used a lot of Typokeen's own artwork and manips to create this, some where from her teaser banners. Those banners all had this font and somewhat of the same textures and colors, which I was quick to copy. I like things to match, sue me! Also threw in a little taste of each of E&B's worlds, and of course, their own little bubble as well!
Enjoy!
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Yep! i'm one of those who hide so i can read when i see an important update *nods head* ;-)
ReplyDeletekeep hearing about this story! Awesome blinkie!
ReplyDeleteThis story is so much more that it's summary implies...want more!!
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